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An old woman sitting on a jute bag, veiled up till neck was constantly crushing some herbs in a stone mortar. Her colorful glass bangles were colliding constantly with each other to create a rhythmic sound which was perfectly in sync with the grinding sound of mortar. The woman was surrounded by numerous other villagers. Each one of them was standing or sitting in an absolute mournful silence, except the one tiniest visible unit of human species, the infant, she was kept on the trunk of a horizontally mutilated tree. Her cry was piercing the silence created by the villagers like a dagger into the heart.
Five a step
from the trunk on which the girl was kept, a small metal pan filled with milk
was being boiled at low flames over some locally available wood pieces.
The sky
turned twilight as the mighty sun had almost disappeared into the horizon. Grey
shade had almost took over the brightness of orange. Just then, a little boy dared to ask his
grandfather in a very mild voice, “What is that thing which that woman is
constantly grinding in the mortar?” To which the old man replied,” That
woman is making medicine for the parents of the girl lying on the mutilated
tree trunk”. The little child looked at the girl’s parents who were looking
sad but certainly not ill. The little boy got puzzled and thought to cross
question his grandfather. He was about to open his mouth again when his
grandfather kept a finger over his mouth, signaling not to ask any more
questions.
Finally the
woman got up and the entire gathering got vigilant. She poured the contents of
the mortar into a small metal bowl and began moving towards the boiling
milk. This time, with every progressing step, not her bangles but anklets were
making sound. She held the milk pot with the help of a thick rolled cloth
piece. She poured the herb paste into the milk and stirred the mixture for some
time to let the herb properly diffuse into the milk.
Now she moved
towards the girl. The girl was now silent may be because she was tired of
crying continuously. The parents of the girl were also part of the mournful
audience. All the villagers came closer to the girl. Up till now darkness had
completely took over the sky. A bearded man gave fire to a lantern and showed
to the woman. The girl might have felt so many shadows around her and she again
began to cry, again piercing the deadly dark silence. Now the woman stretched
her left arm and squeezed the mouth of the girl and with her right hand she
dropped the herb mixed milk in her mouth drop by drop. Afraid of which the girl amplified her cry. Then, like layers unfolding, slowly and gradually her cries stopped. Every villager was still there
around her.
This time the
grandfather told his grandson, “See, the medicine worked. Her parents got
relieved. Not only her parents but also the whole village”. The boy listened to
his grandfather, stood there for some time and said, “The girl is so static now,
I can’t see any of her limbs moving, I can’t even observe her breathing gesture
of rising and contracting chest.”
Grandfather
replied, “Now she’ll never cry, never move any of her limbs and yes will never
breathe.”
Wow!! Spectacular writing
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ReplyDeleteAmazing Vaibhav
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